Thursday, May 8, 2008
Geralldo No Last Name-Irene Garcia
I have met someone that lived really far from that i met. In my opinion, even though i hardly get to see her, to me she was like my mom and my best friend. I met her during the summer at Godinez because she was helping coach the girls basketball team for a while. She was the assistant coach for the basketball girls. She liked me the minute she met (me according to her that is). She thought i was pretty weird though at times.
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Good start, Irene! It sounds like this person is important to you, but you need much more detail to really SHOW us how she is. What is she like? What are some of the motherly/sisterly type of things she has done for you? Do you like her as much as she likes you? Why? And what do you think she likes about you?
Ms. Gharda
Pretty awesome that you like someone i guess that you barely met. But like ms.gharda said describe this person with more detail. other than that i thought it was great.
Pretty awesome that you like someone i guess that you barely met. But like ms.gharda said describe this person with more detail. other than that i thought it was great.
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