I always hear people complain about the rain. You would hear them say stuff like," Great! the rain is now going to get my car all dirty,"or "Now the traffic is going to be crazy."
I don't see the rain like that at all. I see the rain as the giver of live. The rain reminds me of God in a way because, God gave life to humans, and the rain gives life to alot of things.
I see the rain as a tool that god uses to make things come to life. I mean like deserts are lifeless because there is no rain.
The same way God is important to alot of us so is the rain. I belive the rain is the true key towards life
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I like this! It's very poetic, full of effective imagery, and sounds a lot like something Cisneros would have Esperanza write. Needs a little grammatical correction and the last sentence is awkward and needs rephrasing or more explanation. Maybe a few more descriptions, too, so it's not so short? But excellent start!
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