Thursday, April 17, 2008
"Different Hair Styles" Bye: Irene Yvette
I have four members in my family. Its me(Irene),my mom(Alma), my dad(Miguel), and my little sister(Priscilla). My Family and i all have different kind of hair but at some point they're a little similar. My mom and i are the only two girls in my whole entire family that have the thickiest hair. My moms hair is redish blackish and my hair is blackish, redish, and brownish. My moms hair is long and wavy and mine is normal size anf gets really frizzy when i get out of the shower sometimes. I can't really say that my hairs the best but at some times it can be. My little sister had straight black hair that i wished i had. im so in love with her hair but sometimes im kind of glad that i don't have it. i say that because if i want to curl it, it won't saty up that long. My dad on the other hand has black short hair with soft hair thats as smooth as a pillow. Those are our types of hair when it comes to me and my family.
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2 comments:
I liked the way you usedc a similie to describe your dads hair. You used pretty good vocabulary, but i think you could of added a bit more. But overall it was a goood job. Keep it up!
Israel A
Irene ya i get what you are saying i am the same with my older sisters too. We all have different hair styles and types of hair. You have seen Cassies hair mine and Tatianas and its just how it is. Sometimes we want to have that other persons hair but when you think about it we like our hair better becasue maybe it stays when we curl it or something like that. But other than that good essay.
Corinna O.
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