Thursday, April 17, 2008

"House in Neighbors" by Victor S.

I have moved before but it was when i was 4 years old. Well I had lived at my house since I was born and until I was 4. I used to live in Anaheim on the streets of Euclid and La Palma and there you see the apartment complexes i call "Neighbors". That is how we named it to remember were we lived when people asked. But i didn't want to move because that is where most of my cousins lived and there was a park inside Neighbors. Also i didn't want to move because right around the corner they sold the best ice-cream you can have. But the hopes I had were that where we were going to move it was going to be better because at Neighbors there was a lot of "Cholos" including my brothers and my mom afraid that I would turn out like my brothers because I would get influenced by them. So that is why I moved to Santa Ana. Even though there is still a couple of "cholos" here it isn't as bad as in Neighbors. My mom's hopes came true because i became a good student and my hopes also came true because Santa Ana is cool and i have met a lot of great friends here.

1 comment:

Grizzly Growls said...

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