Wednesday, April 16, 2008

laughter journal--- allie r.

I share the same voice tone with my little brother. When something is funny most of the time we both laugh at it. we share most of the same thaughts about some of the things we see randomly on the street. like when we were driving down main street we both blurted out about some really disusting lady that was walking down the street with almost no clothes on, we both blurted out, "uhhh thats really nasty, she looks like an over sized jello pack." its so funny because we never stop laughing we allways seem to laugh at the same things. we are so much alike we like the same sports and i help him understand things that i remember having a hard time understaning when i was little. for example like why i had to keep calm when i got angry about missing a ball or when someone tryed to help me when i didn't want to be helped. i feel kind of sorry for him when he starts school if he ends up goin to the same schools as i did because he will be known to teachers as allieS little brother and most teachers will ask him oh is allie your sister and if he ends up being a bad student he could be compared to me or he could make me look bad and make teachers think why i didn't teach him well or right. he will most likely live in my shadow. so i am kind of glad we are alike because i am a good student and a great athlete.

2 comments:

Grizzly Growls said...

hey Gilbert its me Gilbert nice essay!

Grizzly Growls said...

Hey Allie,
I liked the way you showed examples on how you and your brother are similar. I also liked it when you quoted the lady that you saw on the street. However, you needed to fix your mechanics. But you did a great job overall! Keep it up!

Iman