Friday, April 18, 2008
My Name By Ruben Reyes
My name is Ruben my parents gave me that name because my grandfather died 4 days before i was born so they gave me the same name he had. And they gave me my middle name Emmanuel because when i was born both of my parent stop drinking so they gave me that name it means "dios con nosotros" that means "god with us". Also they gave me Ruben Because is not only my grandfathers name is also my dads name when my mom decided to give me that name my dad was rely happy because i had the same name. honestly i don't like my first name but i like my second name. I don't like Ruben because i rely don't see no meaning to it because i didn't even get to met my grandfather. i would erase my first name and leave my second name as first.
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3 comments:
Im not being a critic but i think you should add a little more detail 2 ur story. like instead of telling us, give us some quotes and descrobe the setting, other then that, it was interesting.
Rocio E.
You should tell your readers more about why you don't like your first name, but the second. I also think you should ask your mother and father who your grandfather was, so you could appreciate your grandfather a little more and leave his name.
Lulu
well done onthat entry you really added some personality to that entry. I think tht you did very well and I also think that it was well formated. My only suggestion would be to add a little "history" to your name, you know a little more "Reyes". you kind of left me hanging there for amomment. well all-in-all GREAT ENTRY!!!
--Eric Landin--
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