Friday, April 18, 2008
Jonathan G. Per 7 Places
the Best place in my house was when was small i would go to the backyard. i knew all the spots to hide when i was small so when i played hide n seek i never got caught. brother he was funny and was funny to hang around when i was small then he moved out but it was alot of fun anyway and anywhere we went. then there is my dog he is a lab his color is brown and he likes the water every time he saw a lake my dog wanted to get him. i also have another dog a mix but he is a rebel he never obeys always runs away and comes back till later. i kind of like that dog not that much.
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This is a great journal entry. It's has minimal, if not any grammatical errors. Although you did meet the journal guidelines, you should be more descriptive. In the entry it seemed like you care more about your dog than your backyard. That's fine but you should describe your backyard so we can visualize it and tells readers why it's so important to you. Interesting entry though.
-Gabriel Ramirez Period 4
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