Thursday, April 17, 2008
house on mango street luis l
when I move from my first home i had to lived there for about one year. my hopes that i had if I wear to move to another house would be to have friends. I had this hope because i had just come from mexeco , so I didn't knew anyone around town. During school i had not a lot of friends because I was the new kid. the only thing I like about my first house was that it had a backyard and my new house didn't. my new house is an apartment and my old one was a house. now in my new house i got a lot of friends just like in school and I'm happy. one thing that change was that now i have alot of neighbors, because iI like in apartmen and before I use to like in a house. A nother thing that had to change was that before I had a back yard and front and now I don't hear any of that any more.
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Your story was good, but you had many spelling errors and you really didn't address the prompt because you talked about wanting and having friends, but not a lot about the houses you lived in or your dream home.
Ivan J.
April 20, 2008
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