It took atleast 6 months to get ready for one big day. I was so nervous because I knew that six months will end up being like one month. My parents wear in a lot of pressure trying to figure out where the party should take place,who was going to be invited,and they had to decide which church my ceremony should take place. I had trouble keeping up with school work because I also had alot of stress. My job was to choose my court of honor. These were people that I had to choose to be in my dances. I chose most of my cousins to join me in a very special day. I got to know them ever better. We had so much fun learning the steps and laughing. I had to go and choose my dress and crown. We also had to plan what king of food we were going to make. My parents deciced to make viria with frijoles and rice. That food was very delicios. On the big day I had to wake up early at 5 oclock,to get my hair done and to eat. I was mostly in a hurry because the women who was going to video tape me was almost going to arrive. After we finish we headed to the church. It was a very long ceremony. The limo was the best part I had alot of fun I got lap dances and some other things that will remain in silience. We headed to the park to take pictures that was kind of boring. After this we went to the salon to get the party started. i dance a lot and met some new family members. I had a great time all thanks to my parents, I love you mom and dad.
By Marisol Flores
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Well,marisol i really like youre story .It was awsome but i think you need to write more.(roxanna armenta per2)
I want to hear more about how your party was. (Roxana)
Add the Disneyland story back that you had on your rough draft, but I'm glad you have more details about the food now. (Ms. Gharda)
thatz pretty cool that you had a quince.I like how u described what was happening and how u felt
u could have also used more imagery,but over all it was pretty good.(Mejia Lizbett per. 3)
Youre party was awsome but you forgot a lot of things that were very awsome like for example when you had to make your speech in front of a lot of people and when we went to down town disney and oscar was saying that you look like cinderella that was cool. Well it was fun being in your court of honor take care
Always, Citlalli Nunez
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